War commander Mini Series 1
Little story to go with the transmission.
Immediately after WT transmission....
The commander- Da*m it
The commander- Someone isolate that signal.
The commander- We need to find out were WrongThinker was communicating from.
Soldier- We are trying sir but the signal is being jammed somehow.
The commander- Get me something anything. Preferably telling me were to send troops.
Soldier- Wait! We've just received some coordinates and something else.
Soldier- Putting it on screen now sir.
The commander- Would someone like to tell me, WHAT IM LOOKING AT HERE!
Lead operator- It is a black thing.
Sarkis- *sigh* it looks like the out line of a mech suit but not one i've seen.
Sarkis- Not to mention this one looks big very big.
The commander- so you think that WrongThinker was trying to warn us?
Sarkis- Yes I do but not just that he was probably telling you get ready because there is a storm coming.
Commander- Sarkis update me now
Sarkis- it seems that this new tech is...wait, we are being hacked commander
Commander- well get them out of our systems
Sarkis- sorry sir, they fried everything, and took all info we had on this mech, but....
Commander- but what
Sarkis- they left us a warning of sorts
Commander- what does it say
Sarkis- it says "don't you worry about our new toy, you will see him soon enough"
Commander- da*m
Commander- Sarkis Get me B.J. And if he doesn't come tell him that I taking his moped.
Sarkis- Yes sir, anyone else.
Commander- Yes bring me Doran and that new girl Deena, I think it's time she proves herself.
Sarkis- Yes sir. Doran- you sent for us commander
Commander- yes, Doran, gather your squad of nightmares, Deena, get ready to bring fire to the skies, Dante, you ready the tanks and get ready to bring hell
Deena- sir might i ask what all of this is for
Commander- we are under attack
Dante- by who sir
Commander- *sighs* we don't know yet
Commander- Anyway get to it.
Commander- Deena hold on a minute.
Deena- Yes commander?
Commander- Tell Mark that I'm allowing him to pilot the E. Sandstorm just this once.
Deena- Sir with all do respect I think me and my cyclones will be more than enough to handle this.
Commander- I'm not saying that your not skilled Deena, I'm just not taking any chances we don't know what were up against.
Deena- (begrudgingly) Yes sir.
Deena- Mark! Get over here.
Mark- Huh? What do you want?
Deena- The commander choose you to pilot the E. Sandstorm.
Mark- Yes!! Finally this is going to be great..
Deena- He also said that you can only use it this once thats it.
Mark- What? NOOOoooo! What did I do wrong.
Engineer- He probably hasn't forgotten how you crashed the Titan into that command center.
Deena- He did what!?
Engineer- Ya you didn't know, you must be new here everybody's heard about that story.
Mark- it was an accident though
Worker- or how about the time he ran the growler into the river
Deena- HE DID WHAT!!
Engineer- didn't he also self destruct one of the power plants.
Worker- Pretty sure it was two.
Deena- *walks away shaking head* this is crazy.
Mark- i wont fail the commander this time.
Engineer- *pats mark on the back* at least she doesn't know you crashed her helicopter yet
* few seconds later *
Deena- MAAAARK!!!!!
Just to be clear Kurt is the driver of the BFG X.
Engineer- Better start runnen you know how those corpus ladies are.
Mark- AAAHHH!!
Deena- Get back here! When I'm finish with you they won't won't be able to tell you from an oil spill!
Doran- Well looks like their having fun.
Kurt- Doubt it, did you see what Mark did to Deena's cyclone?
Doran- No why?
Kurt- There is barely anything left of it It's going tho take the engineers 3 hours to fix it when the usual is 1 or 2.
Doran- Da*m remind me to never let him near my nightmare.
Kurt- Hell after the titan incident i've installed an alarm system on the BFG to make sure no one, especially Mark, tries to use it. *alarm sounds*
*alarm sounds*
Doran- huh, whats that never heard that alarm before
Kurt- sh*t
Deena- *runs pass Doran and Kurt*
Doran- Deena whats wrong, wheres mark
Deena- HES IN THE **** BFG RUN
Mark- *Rams BFG through the wall*
Doran- well...
Kurt- dont worry, i have a plan
Kurt- HEY MARK PRESS THE RED BUTTON, IT WILL LOCK ON TO DEENA
Mark- SWEET *smashes button*
Mark- *gets ejected from BFG*
Kurt- *pulls doran back*
Mark- *lands in front of Doran and Kurt* ouch
BFG X runs into power plant and they both explode.
Kurt- MAARRK! Your dead! You hear me dead!!
Doran- Calm down man the engineers will have it fixed in about 12 hours or so.
Kurt- Come on let me go he's got to learn he can't get away with this anymore.
Doran- Wait I know something worse than death.
Kurt- (stops struggling and turns to Doran) What could be worse than death?
Doran- Looks at Mark (who is still stuck in the ejector seat) then back to Kurt and smiles an evilish smile.
Doran- Why not get Dante to put him thru his training course, and make him eat his cooking too.
Kurt- ( Kurt pauses for a moment stunned) No man should have to endure that.
Kurt- I like it ( Kurt and Deena who had now joined them had an equaly evil grin as Doran did and were all now looking at Mark)
*15 minites later*
Kurt- Hey Dante.
Dante- What do you want?
Kurt- Meet Mark, he wants to go through your training course
Mark- Thats right sir, i want to be a great fighter
Dante- points off in the distance* Are you the one who just blew up those two power plants?
Doran- *comes from behind Dante* come on Dante, train him, whats the worst that could happen?
Dante- Well seeing how much damage he did with Kurt's BFG, the worse that could happen is he'd kill us all.
Deena- *sitting on Dante's tank* he's got a point.
Dante- Get off my tank woman!
Deena *jumps off tank* I say if you can train him that would be great.
Kurt- Yeah i mean look he is all ready to be trained.
Dante- Where is he?
Doran- ....
Deena- ....
Kurt- ....
*explosions in the background*
Doran, Deena, and Kurt- SEE YA DANTE HAVE FUN *as they run away*
Dante- I WILL MAKE AL OF YOU PAY FOR THIS!!
END
Hope you enjoy this mini story Me and TechNinjaDes created and tell me if I should make a second one I don't know if TechNinjaDes will help with the next one but ya thanks for reading.
WrongThinker said:Com***ders! We've detect** incoming hostiles! They **** out of ***here,
we **ought it was al***, but now we're surr******!
There's to* ***y to......TRANSMISSION INTERRUPTED.
Immediately after WT transmission....
The commander- Da*m it
The commander- Someone isolate that signal.
The commander- We need to find out were WrongThinker was communicating from.
Soldier- We are trying sir but the signal is being jammed somehow.
The commander- Get me something anything. Preferably telling me were to send troops.
Soldier- Wait! We've just received some coordinates and something else.
Soldier- Putting it on screen now sir.
The commander- Would someone like to tell me, WHAT IM LOOKING AT HERE!
Lead operator- It is a black thing.
Sarkis- *sigh* it looks like the out line of a mech suit but not one i've seen.
Sarkis- Not to mention this one looks big very big.
The commander- so you think that WrongThinker was trying to warn us?
Sarkis- Yes I do but not just that he was probably telling you get ready because there is a storm coming.
Commander- Sarkis update me now
Sarkis- it seems that this new tech is...wait, we are being hacked commander
Commander- well get them out of our systems
Sarkis- sorry sir, they fried everything, and took all info we had on this mech, but....
Commander- but what
Sarkis- they left us a warning of sorts
Commander- what does it say
Sarkis- it says "don't you worry about our new toy, you will see him soon enough"
Commander- da*m
Commander- Sarkis Get me B.J. And if he doesn't come tell him that I taking his moped.
Sarkis- Yes sir, anyone else.
Commander- Yes bring me Doran and that new girl Deena, I think it's time she proves herself.
Sarkis- Yes sir. Doran- you sent for us commander
Commander- yes, Doran, gather your squad of nightmares, Deena, get ready to bring fire to the skies, Dante, you ready the tanks and get ready to bring hell
Deena- sir might i ask what all of this is for
Commander- we are under attack
Dante- by who sir
Commander- *sighs* we don't know yet
Commander- Anyway get to it.
Commander- Deena hold on a minute.
Deena- Yes commander?
Commander- Tell Mark that I'm allowing him to pilot the E. Sandstorm just this once.
Deena- Sir with all do respect I think me and my cyclones will be more than enough to handle this.
Commander- I'm not saying that your not skilled Deena, I'm just not taking any chances we don't know what were up against.
Deena- (begrudgingly) Yes sir.
Deena- Mark! Get over here.
Mark- Huh? What do you want?
Deena- The commander choose you to pilot the E. Sandstorm.
Mark- Yes!! Finally this is going to be great..
Deena- He also said that you can only use it this once thats it.
Mark- What? NOOOoooo! What did I do wrong.
Engineer- He probably hasn't forgotten how you crashed the Titan into that command center.
Deena- He did what!?
Engineer- Ya you didn't know, you must be new here everybody's heard about that story.
Mark- it was an accident though
Worker- or how about the time he ran the growler into the river
Deena- HE DID WHAT!!
Engineer- didn't he also self destruct one of the power plants.
Worker- Pretty sure it was two.
Deena- *walks away shaking head* this is crazy.
Mark- i wont fail the commander this time.
Engineer- *pats mark on the back* at least she doesn't know you crashed her helicopter yet
* few seconds later *
Deena- MAAAARK!!!!!
Just to be clear Kurt is the driver of the BFG X.
Engineer- Better start runnen you know how those corpus ladies are.
Mark- AAAHHH!!
Deena- Get back here! When I'm finish with you they won't won't be able to tell you from an oil spill!
Doran- Well looks like their having fun.
Kurt- Doubt it, did you see what Mark did to Deena's cyclone?
Doran- No why?
Kurt- There is barely anything left of it It's going tho take the engineers 3 hours to fix it when the usual is 1 or 2.
Doran- Da*m remind me to never let him near my nightmare.
Kurt- Hell after the titan incident i've installed an alarm system on the BFG to make sure no one, especially Mark, tries to use it. *alarm sounds*
*alarm sounds*
Doran- huh, whats that never heard that alarm before
Kurt- sh*t
Deena- *runs pass Doran and Kurt*
Doran- Deena whats wrong, wheres mark
Deena- HES IN THE **** BFG RUN
Mark- *Rams BFG through the wall*
Doran- well...
Kurt- dont worry, i have a plan
Kurt- HEY MARK PRESS THE RED BUTTON, IT WILL LOCK ON TO DEENA
Mark- SWEET *smashes button*
Mark- *gets ejected from BFG*
Kurt- *pulls doran back*
Mark- *lands in front of Doran and Kurt* ouch
BFG X runs into power plant and they both explode.
Kurt- MAARRK! Your dead! You hear me dead!!
Doran- Calm down man the engineers will have it fixed in about 12 hours or so.
Kurt- Come on let me go he's got to learn he can't get away with this anymore.
Doran- Wait I know something worse than death.
Kurt- (stops struggling and turns to Doran) What could be worse than death?
Doran- Looks at Mark (who is still stuck in the ejector seat) then back to Kurt and smiles an evilish smile.
Doran- Why not get Dante to put him thru his training course, and make him eat his cooking too.
Kurt- ( Kurt pauses for a moment stunned) No man should have to endure that.
Kurt- I like it ( Kurt and Deena who had now joined them had an equaly evil grin as Doran did and were all now looking at Mark)
*15 minites later*
Kurt- Hey Dante.
Dante- What do you want?
Kurt- Meet Mark, he wants to go through your training course
Mark- Thats right sir, i want to be a great fighter
Dante- points off in the distance* Are you the one who just blew up those two power plants?
Doran- *comes from behind Dante* come on Dante, train him, whats the worst that could happen?
Dante- Well seeing how much damage he did with Kurt's BFG, the worse that could happen is he'd kill us all.
Deena- *sitting on Dante's tank* he's got a point.
Dante- Get off my tank woman!
Deena *jumps off tank* I say if you can train him that would be great.
Kurt- Yeah i mean look he is all ready to be trained.
Dante- Where is he?
Doran- ....
Deena- ....
Kurt- ....
*explosions in the background*
Doran, Deena, and Kurt- SEE YA DANTE HAVE FUN *as they run away*
Dante- I WILL MAKE AL OF YOU PAY FOR THIS!!
END
Hope you enjoy this mini story Me and TechNinjaDes created and tell me if I should make a second one I don't know if TechNinjaDes will help with the next one but ya thanks for reading.
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Mark- *limps toward Deena, and Doran*
Deena- what happened to you
Mark- i crashed dantes tank
Doran- ****, that must have been one hell of a crash
Mark- oh, these injuries arent from the crash, they are from dante
Deena- ....
Doran- .....
Mark- he also told me to tell you, watch your backs
Doran- Well he doesn't have his tank now, well at least for a while anyway so I wouldn't worry yet anyway.
Deena- I heard the warhorses haven't been in use for a while I guess you cold use them when your better Mark.
Deena- I would recommend a mega tank that can't really do any thing to the base but those a so ancient and rare now so we don't have one and even if we did we wouldn't waist our resources building one anyway.
( Just then the loud speaker in the hanger suddenly made everyone freeze)
Jason- Jericho's SCOUT TEAM REPORTED IN ALL SQUAD LEADERS REPORT TO THE COMMAND ROOM NOW!!!
( Everyone seemed to have been stopped cold ether staring at the loud speaker or at each other)
Deena- Lets go quickly this sound serous.
Doran- Agreed we better hurry.
Mark- Hey wait for me!
Doran- You'd better stay here and we will tell you later.
Mark * sighs sadly * Fine.
( In the command room )
Commander- Jericho has sent use his recent scouting report and well Um Jason put it on screen.
Jason- Ok um just gotta enlarge it a bit and boom there we go.
Sheila- What the he*l is that?
Bro. J- It looks like a robotic mech of some kind.
Kara- Look dangerous I like it.
Commander- This people, is the legion or Elite legion. This is what we assume WrongThinker was trying to worn us about before he went missing.
Kurt- Doesn't look incredibly dangerous.
Jason- ( Chuckles twice ) Tell that to Jericho. He thought the same thing so he attacked it and he nearly sh*t him self when the thing multiplied and gunned down most of his platoon in about 15 seconds of the "battle" beginning.
All- What!
Commander- Now thats all we now so far but we need everyone to get ready because I think the War to come going to be one he*l of a fight and we best be ready for anything.
All- Yes Sir!
Commander- Your all dismissed.
Doran- ****, that thing took out Jericho's squad in under 15 seconds
Kara- crazy, and he is one of the best
Deena- hmph, i could take it on, me and my cyclones will destroy him
Jericho- *walking toward the command room, covered in blood and oil* it wont work Deena
Deena- why not
Jericho- lets just say we need a new arch angel pilot
Bro J.- what, what happened to Josh
Jericho- *grabs Bro J* he is dead, my whole squad, we shouldnt have engaged, now excuse me, i must report to the commander *walks into the command room*
Commander- Jericho are you-
Jericho- im fine, but im not letting that hunk of scrap get away with murdering my squad and Josh
Jason- i told you not to engage until we had fully scanned the mech
Jericho- oh is this the time for "i told you so's"
Jason- maybe if you listened your men wouldnt be dead
Jericho- *shouts* YOU WANNA TAKE THIS OUTSIDE GROWLER BOY, GO GRAB YOUR COPILOT TODD, AND WE WILL SETTLE THIS
Jason- i would but it looks like your truck is wrecked, because you didnt follow orders
Jericho- then how about we settle this like men, with our fists
Commander- or how about i send you both out to the wilds and leave you to the factions
Jericho- ....
Jason- ....
Commander- ok then, now Jericho, what is it you need
Jericho- i need revenge, so, tell these workers to install the gold plated HH-2 targeting system, get me a new squad of men, and i will be needing Jason
Jason- what, why me
Jericho- why are you scared or something
Commander- STOP, now why do you need Jason, Todd and the growler
Jericho- i have an idea that might get Jason close enough to find a weakness, and me enough to get revenge
Commander- Jason, what do you think
Jason- hm, im not sure
Jericho- thats fine, Mark can drive the growler
Jason- WAIT, i will go, that destructive force of nature isnt going near my unit
Commander- *looking out the window* too late
Jason- **** IT! **** IT! **** IT! *runs out of the room franticly*
Jericho- why do you even keep mark around, he was a good explosives expert, but we have no need for suicide bombers anymore
Commander- he might look like an idiot and act like one, but...he is in fact the smartest person we have on base
*The two watch as Jason and Todd chase down their unit*
good job anyway, i'm very interested to see how it goes
this should be a regular thing.. it's very funny and entertaining. good job!
Todd- WE JUST GOT IT FIXED!!
Engineer- Hey guys Marks taking the Growler again.
Worker- No No No NO. We just fixed that!
Worker- Someone take out the treads and back tires so it can move. HURRY!
( Back in the command room )
Commander- ( Talking Over loudspeaker ) SOMEONE GET HIM OUT OF THERE AND PUT HIM IN THE MEDICL BAY, AND PUT GUARDS THERE TO WATCH HIM!!
Jericho- That's easier said than done.
Commander- I know that but were going to need the Growler in the coming fight and missions.
Commander- Anyway ( Speaking in a serous tone ) Any news on Wrong Thinker. Did you find anything?
Jericho- ( Shaking his head ) No sir nothing, but I am sure that legion what ever it is was what he was trying to worn us about.
Commander- ( He sighs loudly) I figured as much. You fought the thing is there any thing else you can tell me?
Jericho- Maybe one thing we saw them testing it on some nightmares and it fire some kind of missile shower.
Commander- What? A missile shower? This day keeps getting better and better.
Jericho- The thing is the nightmares were not destroyed.
Commander- What?
Jericho- They looked shocked more than anything.
Commander- So we've got a "mech" that can duplicate itself, and fire a shower of shock missiles, and managed to take out not only your platoon, but also the archangel.
Commander- Just perfect.
( Then they both jumped a little when they heard an explosion outside )
Commander- OOHH WHAT NOW!!
Commander- **** it *walks outside*
*growler drives toward the commander*
Commander- *sighs* if you want something done right....*dives out of the way and puts explosive on the growler*
Commander- .....you gotta do it yourself *clicks button*
*growler treads explode*
Mark- *flies out of the growler* ouch
Commander- get him to the medic bay and be sure he is guarded 24/7
*loud speaker* COMMANDER, AND ALL SQUAD LEADERS REPORT TO THE COMMAND ROOM
*10 mins later in the command room*
Commander- Jason what is it
Jason- we have an incoming transmission
Kara- from who
Jason- General Mutoto...
Jericho- accept it
Jason- *clicks button*
Mutoto- i see you have encountered my new weapon, how did you like it
Dante- you sick monster, you will pay for the men you killed
Mutoto- but see Dante if you hadnt left, i wouldnt have needed a new weapon, this is on you
Dante- i will be sure i see you die for what youve done
Mutoto- hmph, good luck, oh and before i leave, Jericho, attacking me again, isnt the smartest idea, this time follow orders
Jericho- how do you...
Mutoto- lets say i have ears everywhere, goodluck....Commander *screen statics out*
Jericho- who's the rat, ITS PROBABLY YOU DANTE
Dante- IF IT WERE ME YOUD BE DEAD BY NOW
*loud explosion outside*
*alarm sounds*
*loud speaker* we are under attack all men and women to battle staions, defend this base
Commander- we will figure this out later, get out there and defend our base now
I love this whole story thing. Great reading.
Workers- Yes Sir!
Commander- Da*m. Sarkis just had to be visiting Corpus for info.
Commander- ( To himself ) We need to find out who is attacking us noOOWWW OH SH*T!!!
( He yelled as the ground collapsed below him from what seem like a Commando"s rocket )
Commander- ah son of Bi*ch. Its not a car its rocket.
( His left leg was cut and had pieces of metal piercing the front of it, but could still walk his head was also bleeding but paid little attention to it as he limped his way to the Ronin that was parked about 20 feet away )
Commander- Da*m these guys this was my favorite suit.
Doran- ( from across the room ) Sir are you alright?!!
( The commander nodded and waved him away and pointed to his custom Nightmare trying to signal him to get in and provide cover fire, and he seemed to get it and he started to spring over to the nightmare )
Commander- I swear Doran's Fu*ken Psychic.
( He finally made it to the ronin )
Commander- *groans* I don't remember the hatch being so high and the ronin so big.
( A lot of cursing and 2 failed attempts at climbing later )
Commander- *Wheezing* Da*m Ryu-Ki engineers and there stupid designs that assume everyones a Da*m ninja.
( He placed the V.A.H. ( Visual Aid Helmet) on his now poorly bandaged head and turned on his earpiece/microphone )
Commander Doran you there?
Doran- Ya i'm hear but a little busy at the moment. ( explosions in the back ground)
Commander- I'm coming to assist in the Ronin, I want to test out the railgun myself I heard it pretty fun to use.
Doran- Are you sure you should be fighting in your condition sir?
Commander- I'll be fine. Now lets GIVE THEM HE*LLL!!!
Doran- YES SIR!!
Commander- all squad leaders report
Kara- Kara reporting, oh sh*t *gun fire* Kara reporting in
Doran- Doran reporting in *explosion in background*
Dante- D**e re**rting in
Jericho- Jericho reporting
Bro J.- Jerimaih reporting
Deena- Deena reporting
Sheila- Reporting
Commander- everyone to the middle of the base, i have a plan
*5 mins later*
Doran- sir we are backed into a corner, what is your plan, kara and shelia and J cant hold their ground much longer
Commander- Jason, i hope you dont mind....
Jason- *on computer* dont mind what
All Squad leaders- you didnt
Commander- i did
Commander- MARK DRIVE THAT GROWLER
*huge explosion*
*growler drives at full speed destroying everything*
Mark- FINALLY HAHAHAHAHAH
*mark fires rapidly and in every direction*
Jason- GOD **** IT THEY JUST REPAIRED IT
Commander- ahh send me the bill you cry baby
*attackers begin to retreat*
Commander- FULL ATTACK FORMATION, NONE OF THEM LEAVE THIS BASE ALIVE
Doran- YOU HEARD THE COMMANDER SHOOT TO KIL
*all squad leaders and commander charge forward unleashing hell*
Commander- Use the Growler as a shield and if there out of some miracle one of them survives capture them and question him.
Mark- No Promises!
Commander- I hope I don't live to regret letting him drive the Growler.
Commander- Jason you there? Jason?
Jason- *Crying* What?
Commander- Are you crying?
Jason- No! *sniffle*
Commander- ( Bul**hit he thinks to himself ) Anyway I need you to contact Sarkis he should be at Corpus right now.
Jason- ( After pulling himself together ) Corpus? Why is he there?
Commander- That is none of your concern just tell him to get back ASAP.
Jason- Ok fine i'm on it.
Commander- Now back to the task at hand.
He turns the Ronin out from behind the rampaging Growler and targets 2 vanquishers and fires the railgun at the first sending it spiraling into a nearby tree setting it a blaze, he then targeted the second that had began to accelerate in reverse firing spastically in an attempt to keep him away.
Commander- Oh he*l no you can't get away.
He aimed the railgun above the retreating vanquisher and firing a shot that made a crater behind it that the vanquisher then fell into.
Commander- And boom goes the dynamite. *click*
The trapped vanquisher into a fireball of twisted metal and what used to be the drivers.
Commander- Yay barbecue.
His little victory didn't last long as he saw three viper class mech suits waring war paint approaching.
Commander- Oh Sh*t
He switched the Ronin into reverse as he fired the railgun at the closest but, it dodged it and began its advance again.
Commander- Hey where are those night owls I asked to be ready.
Commander- Hello? If anyone is receiving I need assistance now!!
He fired at front of them in an attempt to throw them of balance. One then attempted to fire its corrosive payload at him as he attempted to dodge one of corrosive booms hit the armor of the left arm, and began to melt.
Commander- Sh*t
As for War Commander I will probably come back around October 2018.
Granted if Net Neutrality gets taken down. Then forget about any free to pay/play games for me. (I have a soft spot for holidays and zombies)