War commander Mini Series 1

  • xXLeadTheChargeXx
    xXLeadTheChargeXx
    Potential Threat
    Joined Apr 2015 Posts: 54
    Hey what about adding a new hero?, since the jackel doesn't have one, Why not make a fanmade one?, Welp im only gonna suggest a name, Gunner (Take dis seriously)
    Lead the charge into the battlefield of life, May god be with you all and let evil not drive you to hell, You think you stand alone, but you will always have family and friends to pick you up when you fall,
  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    edited 26 Apr 2016, 9:09PM
    Ok since they don't have one yet I'll put it in the next volume,  but other leaders call him gunny as a nickname ok. Hope thats acceptable. :)
  • STRIKER_STRIKER
    STRIKER_STRIKER
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Jul 2015 Posts: 182
    awesome work guys , dont stop the series , even if you make 1 episode a day lol
  • BaNkErx
    BaNkErx
    Skilled Warrior
    Joined Apr 2013 Posts: 341

    Omg I love this. Nice guys don't let it end.

  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    edited 26 Apr 2016, 9:10PM
    I apologize for not posting any today I've been busy so the ending for volume one should be out tomorrow. Again I apologize for the silence and no post today.

    Red out...  
  • DarkSkinNinja
    DarkSkinNinja
    Joined Jan 2014 Posts: 2,878
    I apologize for not posting any today I've been busy so the next part should be out tomorrow. Again I apologize for the silence and no post today.

    Red out...  
    same here, just saw this
    you challenge me in forums?Image result for anime gif swordsmanthen be prepared to lose.
  • STRIKER_STRIKER
    STRIKER_STRIKER
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Jul 2015 Posts: 182
    I apologize for not posting any today I've been busy so the next part should be out tomorrow. Again I apologize for the silence and no post today.

    Red out...  
    same here, just saw this
    cool , np
  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    The left arm of the Ronin was melting slowly and will soon melt through the armor to the cables and devices that assist the controls of the left arm.  

    Commander- Da*m I'm going to lose the arm soon, and if they bring any air in after it's gone I won't be able to hit them accurately. 

    Commander- ( over the mic ) I repeat If anyone can here me, there are three Viper X class mech are coming from the northeast, I am hit and am being forced back I need assistance now!

    Commander- Still nothing? 

    The Viper squad fires a barrage of bombs and he again attempts to dodge them but there are to many and two hit the hull another hit the left tread  and one more hit the hat looking thing at the top. 

    Commander- Well I'm scr*wed now.

    The left arm of the Ronin was now dangling from the few remaining wires and electronic devices. And the hull was starting to melt away along wing the treads and hat thing. 

    Commander- It won't last much longer. 

    He was thinking that just as the tread melted in half and the Ronin made a full 180 and the momentum of the chase sent it rolling forward and into a nearby abandoned building. 

    Commander- It looks like it's over for me now...

    End of Volume 1

    Authors/ editors: 

    Redspower67    TechNinjaDes 

    And a shout out to all the other Moderators and players for the current support and hope you look forward to Volume 2. 

     Thanks for reading 

    I'll see you when the sky's are Black and the ground is Red. 
  • Dune Rader
    Dune Rader
    Strike-force Captain
    Joined Dec 2012 Posts: 799
     wtg guys it has been great so far, it is hard at times to work on things like this please keep up the good work.
    Respect, Courage and Wisdom
  • Dune Rader
    Dune Rader
    Strike-force Captain
    Joined Dec 2012 Posts: 799
    the hat on top of the Ronin is called a  jingasa or war hat 

    Respect, Courage and Wisdom
  • Commander Sarkis
    Commander Sarkis
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Apr 2013 Posts: 129

    If I'm correct Sarkis was an ex Corpus spy, the Sarkis Boss Base has him as a spy/ex spy. That's what I personally think. Awesome story by the way! (It would awesome if you made a side story of Sarkis and Deena as spies for the Corpus.)

  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179

    If I'm correct Sarkis was an ex Corpus spy, the Sarkis Boss Base has him as a spy/ex spy. That's what I personally think. Awesome story by the way! (It would awesome if you made a side story of Sarkis and Deena as spies for the Corpus.)

    That's a good idea I will think about that but, I do need more info on corpus like different people.
     
  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    edited 7 Apr 2019, 10:28AM
    N/A  
  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    edited 7 Apr 2019, 10:28AM
    N/A  
  • redspower67
    redspower67
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2014 Posts: 179
    Wow, the F*** happened to this game while I was gone, well i'm not going to be long I quit a while back got to busy and it wasn't fun anymore, well

     sorry to all. Just came back to reminisce a little maybe i'll come back any restart the mini series keep original things, but no promises thanks to all. 
     
    Commander Red out..
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