An another look for the VC ships

Chaos Slayer
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edited 29 Dec 2017, 2:37PM
First of all, I'd like to kindly ask those who hate anime/ other japanese stuff or hate anything that is re-drawn (such as fan artwork) in anime:
Don't stay here, please. You don't need to read any further than this because it's all about what you dislike. opinions n stuff are welcome, but I don't want insults and toxic behavior toward me, such as someone calling me "weeb" (which i consider an offense) in another thread. Thank you.



If you don't hate it...


I play VEGA for years, I enjoy the PVP battles and + good friends and teammates I made there...
When japanese guys do an anime or artwork, they tend to grab something random and (usually) turn into something very different that looks cool. Many people around the world follow it and I did as well.
In Kantai Collection, they went and grabbed some real life ships, turning them into girls... so after a while, I had the idea of doing the same with a hull in VEGA: I've chosen Dominion (if I say it's NOT my favorite ship in the game... I'm being a liar). Also, it still has a lot of potential to fight in T6 PVP battles despite the Paladin and it's drones being so powerful.


With the help with a friend who has been improving on their art, it came true and the result is actually looking amazing.


I introduce you the spaceshipgirl Dominion Carrier and her loyal Ranger Swarms!





What I had in mind was to give her the looks of a succubus, as it is about a Demon Corps thing. A pair of horns, a long tail and the large wings on her back that also launch the squadrons, and she carries the DC symbol on her chest. She is redhead because it's the main color of the faction, and in my opinion: the black color on her uniform fits perfectly.




A Chibi... my friend let me have the wings and horns as they've drawed it quickly (and grabbed DC symbol to put on chest).

My friend also suggested a backstory and personality for her, so I made one based on game's storyline, some characteristics of the Demon Corps and some phrases heard in monthly events that had DC as enemies (such as the ones that have "blood" in the sentence), all spoken by Dominion herself:


1- My name is Dominion. I am a Carrier, and the greatest pride of the Demon Corps. Uncompromising in my brutal authority, I am built to establish control and dominance. My purpose and ONLY purpose is to see my enemies burn! Anyone who opposes my power will have the stars painted with their blood!

2- So, this is how the rebellion fights, huh? Now I see the reason why you've been facing VEGA for so long and still stand in their way... even after you rebels fight each other fiercely everyday. Fufu... I guess being under your command might be funnier than being controlled by those worthless, corrupt VEGA idiots. All they know is to lose their battles and get their technologies stolen. I am sick of that!

3- Command me well, sir. And I shall take you to the conquest of this void. It will be an honor to fight alongside the bravely of the rebellion; but remember: I take no prisioners, I am merciless, I am bent on absolute annihilation. If you betray me, my devastating power is going to be the last thing you will ever see!

4- Since the day I joined the rebellion, I have felt the heat of war much more than before. This was my greatest decision, beyond my own expectations. I never thought that being with the rebels would make me enjoy the only reason of my existance so much.

5- Actually, I am happy that VEGA now sees me as a traitor, they will eventually come and try to kill me. But I was born in blood and I will make them drown in theirs if they dare to oppose me.

6- These horns and tail, you ask? they are... mine... along with my mighty hangar wings, they make me the demon I was created to be. Well, I am a Demon Corps soldier, right? It makes sense, doesn't it?

7- Sometimes I miss General Geir, he was the only man worth following in the middle of such bunch of corrupt idiots. I heard that he is involved with something... "Geno" or "Xeno"... what is that?


TLDR - 1: introducing herself. 2: knowing the rebels and abandoning VEGA. 3: she's now in a rebel commander's fleet. 4: a while after she's with the rebels. 5: she wants to destroy VEGA fleets. 6: she's being friendly with her curious ally. 7- she really didn't like being with VEGA, but she respects Geir.


Edit: Added Javelin (scroll down) and changed thread's name because Dominion is no longer alone here.

One last note: I cannot show here who my friend is, the only accessible thing at this moment will lead to a NSFW link. If you want, ask me in private message.
My fleet is growing!
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  • GameHat
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    Ha a little late to respond but:

    Whenever I see something like this my completionist side always craves seeing the full set. Entire vega conflict armada as animu grills sounds like a fun little set :p
    Heaven forbid if MK upgrades were included :X

    Fan creation section never recieves much attention, I guess mostly cause vega players who frequent the forum art so into the creative side (or don't feel like they have enough skill to make something they're keen to show off). Don't let that get you down, this is a neat little project ;)

    The idea of demon corp being inspired by both ship and demon themself is neat, I think that as a pretty **** cool blending of the themes. As for this picture and your character piece beneath, the 'uncompromising in brutal authority' thing makes me imagine a dominion animu girl would be more like kill la kill's Satsuki or the like, this one looks a lot less 'harsh'/'ruthless' than that (not that it isn't also good).

    Would definitely be interesting to figure how to express and translate the various 'personality profiles' of the different factions, and the different hull types, in humanoid form - see that cross section going on when you look at the group.
    3 chins, 3 teams, one victor;
  • HarpoonoZenith
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    I wanna see the other carriers done like this!!!!
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  • Chaos Slayer
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    GameHat said:

    Ha a little late to respond but:

    Whenever I see something like this my completionist side always craves seeing the full set. Entire vega conflict armada as animu grills sounds like a fun little set :p
    Heaven forbid if MK upgrades were included :X

    Well, it's gonna take a while for a few more ships, but we're gonna do some soon. And MK is off bounds, maybe unless we decide to do a Xeno or AXIS one.


    The idea of demon corp being inspired by both ship and demon themself is neat, I think that as a pretty **** cool blending of the themes. As for this picture and your character piece beneath, the 'uncompromising in brutal authority' thing makes me imagine a dominion animu girl would be more like kill la kill's Satsuki or the like, this one looks a lot less 'harsh'/'ruthless' than that (not that it isn't also good).
    It wouldn't be that cool if she didn't have these horns, right? About the "uncompromising" thing, that's 100% about the ingame description of the ship: Uncompromising in its brutal authority, the Dominion Carrier is built to establish control and dominance. I just replaced 3rd person for 1st person ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

    I wanna see the other carriers done like this!!!!
    My friend and I are busy people, so it's gonna take time. But two things already planed are a damaged Dom (we'll do both "normal" and damaged for every ship we draw) and:
    Javelin
    My fleet is growing!
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  • HarpoonoZenith
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    I cant wait till you make the Ragnarök or Valkyrie Those are my fav carriers...
    Perhaps the Valk will have Marks on her face (Such as some of the patterns the valk does

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  • Infinity EIC
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    First of all, I'd like to kindly ask those who hate anime/ other japanese stuff or hate anything that is re-drawn (such as fan artwork) in anime:
    Don't stay here, please. You don't need to read any further than this because it's all about what you dislike. opinions n stuff are welcome, but I don't want insults and toxic behavior toward me, such as someone calling me "weeb" (which i consider an offense) in another thread. Thank you.



    If you don't hate it...


    I play VEGA for years, I enjoy the PVP battles and + good friends and teammates I made there...
    When japanese guys do an anime or artwork, they tend to grab something random and (usually) turn into something very different that looks cool. Many people around the world follow it and I did as well.
    In Kantai Collection, they went and grabbed some real life ships, turning them into girls... so after a while, I had the idea of doing the same with a hull in VEGA: I've chosen Dominion (if I say it's NOT my favorite ship in the game... I'm being a liar). Also, it still has a lot of potential to fight in T6 PVP battles despite the Paladin and it's drones being so powerful.


    With the help with a friend who has been improving on their art, it came true and the result is actually looking amazing.


    I introduce you the spaceshipgirl Dominion Carrier and her loyal Ranger Swarms!





    What I had in mind was to give her the looks of a succubus, as it is about a Demon Corps thing. A pair of horns, a long tail and the large wings on her back that also launch the squadrons, and she carries the DC symbol on her chest. She is redhead because it's the main color of the faction, and in my opinion: the black color on her uniform fits perfectly.




    A Chibi... my friend let me have the wings and horns as they've drawed it quickly (and grabbed DC symbol to put on chest).

    My friend also suggested a backstory and personality for her, so I made one based on game's storyline, some characteristics of the Demon Corps and some phrases heard in monthly events that had DC as enemies (such as the ones that have "blood" in the sentence), all spoken by Dominion herself:


    1- My name is Dominion. I am a Carrier, and the greatest pride of the Demon Corps. Uncompromising in my brutal authority, I am built to establish control and dominance. My purpose and ONLY purpose is to see my enemies burn! Anyone who opposes my power will have the stars painted with their blood!

    2- So, this is how the rebellion fights, huh? Now I see the reason why you've been facing VEGA for so long and still stand in their way... even after you rebels fight each other fiercely everyday. Fufu... I guess being under your command might be funnier than being controlled by those worthless, corrupt VEGA idiots. All they know is to lose their battles and get their technologies stolen. I am sick of that!

    3- Command me well, sir. And I shall take you to the conquest of this void. It will be an honor to fight alongside the bravely of the rebellion; but remember: I take no prisioners, I am merciless, I am bent on absolute annihilation. If you betray me, my devastating power is going to be the last thing you will ever see!

    4- Since the day I joined the rebellion, I have felt the heat of war much more than before. This was my greatest decision, beyond my own expectations. I never thought that being with the rebels would make me enjoy the only reason of my existance so much.

    5- Actually, I am happy that VEGA now sees me as a traitor, they will eventually come and try to kill me. But I was born in blood and I will make them drown in theirs if they dare to oppose me.

    6- These horns and tail, you ask? they are... mine... along with my mighty hangar wings, they make me the demon I was created to be. Well, I am a Demon Corps soldier, right? It makes sense, doesn't it?

    7- Sometimes I miss General Geir, he was the only man worth following in the middle of such bunch of corrupt idiots. I heard that he is involved with something... "Geno" or "Xeno"... what is that?


    TLDR - 1: introducing herself. 2: knowing the rebels and abandoning VEGA. 3: she's now in a rebel commander's fleet. 4: a while after she's with the rebels. 5: she wants to destroy VEGA fleets. 6: she's being friendly with her curious ally. 7- she really didn't like being with VEGA, but she respects Geir.
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  • Chaos Slayer
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    Here is the second ship  (̶f̶i̶n̶a̶l̶l̶y̶!̶)̶ in this n̶o̶i̶c̶e̶ armada: The Javelin Flagshipgirl!




    Maybe she didn't had much do add like Dominion, but there are the Wormhole Drive on her back, the Federation symbol on shoulder and the word "VEGA" on boots because there was no good place to put it other than there.




    Of course I have to give her a chibi, it was just a bit easier than I thought  a̶n̶d̶ ̶a̶d̶d̶e̶d̶ ̶a̶ ̶p̶i̶x̶e̶l̶a̶t̶e̶d̶ ̶s̶y̶m̶b̶o̶l̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶e̶r̶


    If my friend and I continue drawing more ships like this, then I'll certainly give a backstory for all of them. This one isn't as creepy as Dominion's (and it shouldn't be due to not being Demon Corps) but I tried my best.


    1- I am Javelin. My job is transportation, I can take friendly fleets to the other side of the void in seconds! However, I am unable to defend myself alone, so I need my friends close to travel with them safely.

    2- This is the Wormhole Drive. Having such incredible technology, I can jump across a sector, bringing my escorts with me to ambush our enemies and take them by surprise. They will not see us coming, heh heh! But hey this is a very delicate device, I need to avoid combat in order to keep it operating, or else I'll get webs on my body for waiting a so long repair.

    3- I was with VEGA until I jumped away, like very very far away from them. And when I did, I just felt like I was freed from that stupid federation. If I ever go back there, I will do it as enemy; that's why I want to be by your side from now on, rebel.

    4- So, Will you accept a ship like me in your fleet? I'm not very useful in combat, thus I'm going to need some friends around to make sure I take as many as I can across everywhere! You will? Thank you, heh heh! Let's travel and see the galaxy together, shall we?

    5- Hmm? My... Wormhole Drive's weight? it feels almost like nothing. Why are you so surprised? We're made with great physical strength to have no issues when walking with our equipement! By the way, they are not detachable and it HURTS when they are hit, then let's be careful about this, okay?

    6- After so many jumps, after putting my precious tech to use so much to attack VEGA by surprise, I just got Bertram in my mind for a while. That guy was so stupid, I don't have much memory of him as I was still being built when he was around, but I do remember that he was horrible at strategy and had the mental age of a child... like a big. angry. child. Hahahahahahahahaha!

    7- I don't need to be upgraded, okay? I'm not made for combat, I'm made to travel long distances with my escorts. You don't have to waste time giving me weapons or anything besides a little improvement on my Wormhole Drive. And for the Stars' sake, don't think of making me wear armors because if I get attacked, I'll die of boredom before my device finishes repairing.


    TLDR - 1: Introduction. 2: Talking about the Wormhole device and complaining about it's repair time. 3: abandoned VEGA and wishes to be a rebel. 4: Accepted in the rebellion with a happy reaction. 5: Talks briefely about the ships in general, but maybe she's lying about half of the info. 6: Mocking Bertram Rumbelow. 7: A little advice about refitting and another complaint about her long repair time.


    PS: hey EIC what was the point of quoting my whole thread without leaving an answer?
    My fleet is growing!
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  • HarpoonoZenith
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    OML YAY
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  • Flamin Hot
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    I don't dislike, and I don't like it. It takes a game of war and fighting one another, and turns it into a child's cartoon (as I see anime, which I've seen, and enjoyed, just not something I wish to watch ever again). Yes, I respect the fact that you put effort into the fan art, but it in all honesty, it ruins the vibes of destruction...and what ever else fits into that category.

    Good job tho

  • Glowlight
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    Here is the second ship  (̶f̶i̶n̶a̶l̶l̶y̶!̶)̶ in this n̶o̶i̶c̶e̶ armada: The Javelin Flagshipgirl!




    Maybe she didn't had much do add like Dominion, but there are the Wormhole Drive on her back, the Federation symbol on shoulder and the word "VEGA" on boots because there was no good place to put it other than there.




    Of course I have to give her a chibi, it was just a bit easier than I thought  a̶n̶d̶ ̶a̶d̶d̶e̶d̶ ̶a̶ ̶p̶i̶x̶e̶l̶a̶t̶e̶d̶ ̶s̶y̶m̶b̶o̶l̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶e̶r̶


    If my friend and I continue drawing more ships like this, then I'll certainly give a backstory for all of them. This one isn't as creepy as Dominion's (and it shouldn't be due to not being Demon Corps) but I tried my best.


    1- I am Javelin. My job is transportation, I can take friendly fleets to the other side of the void in seconds! However, I am unable to defend myself alone, so I need my friends close to travel with them safely.

    2- This is the Wormhole Drive. Having such incredible technology, I can jump across a sector, bringing my escorts with me to ambush our enemies and take them by surprise. They will not see us coming, heh heh! But hey this is a very delicate device, I need to avoid combat in order to keep it operating, or else I'll get webs on my body for waiting a so long repair.

    3- I was with VEGA until I jumped away, like very very far away from them. And when I did, I just felt like I was freed from that stupid federation. If I ever go back there, I will do it as enemy; that's why I want to be by your side from now on, rebel.

    4- So, Will you accept a ship like me in your fleet? I'm not very useful in combat, thus I'm going to need some friends around to make sure I take as many as I can across everywhere! You will? Thank you, heh heh! Let's travel and see the galaxy together, shall we?

    5- Hmm? My... Wormhole Drive's weight? it feels almost like nothing. Why are you so surprised? We're made with great physical strength to have no issues when walking with our equipement! By the way, they are not detachable and it HURTS when they are hit, then let's be careful about this, okay?

    6- After so many jumps, after putting my precious tech to use so much to attack VEGA by surprise, I just got Bertram in my mind for a while. That guy was so stupid, I don't have much memory of him as I was still being built when he was around, but I do remember that he was horrible at strategy and had the mental age of a child... like a big. angry. child. Hahahahahahahahaha!

    7- I don't need to be upgraded, okay? I'm not made for combat, I'm made to travel long distances with my escorts. You don't have to waste time giving me weapons or anything besides a little improvement on my Wormhole Drive. And for the Stars' sake, don't think of making me wear armors because if I get attacked, I'll die of boredom before my device finishes repairing.


    TLDR - 1: Introduction. 2: Talking about the Wormhole device and complaining about it's repair time. 3: abandoned VEGA and wishes to be a rebel. 4: Accepted in the rebellion with a happy reaction. 5: Talks briefely about the ships in general, but maybe she's lying about half of the info. 6: Mocking Bertram Rumbelow. 7: A little advice about refitting and another complaint about her long repair time.


    PS: hey EIC what was the point of quoting my whole thread without leaving an answer?

    Plz make more these are good
  • GameHat
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    I saw your updated sig in a different thread and knew it was time to come back here.
    Another fun addition, keep the collection rolling :tongue:

    For your comment about the boot being the only place for the vega title, I think it looks good though if you think its a problem you two could always have moved the armament badge to a hair clip and made the vega title be on the arm instead.

    Any thoughts on what ship to do next?
    3 chins, 3 teams, one victor;
  • Chaos Slayer
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    edited 19 Jan 2018, 8:41PM
    Yeah... I always find someone who says that kind of stuff, sooner or later, no matter what... I'm "ruining" the game content (with a bonus of turning it into child cartoon). Sorry, if that's it, then I am really "ruining" more ships.

    GameHat said:
    I saw your updated sig in a different thread and knew it was time to come back here.
    Another fun addition, keep the collection rolling :tongue:

    For your comment about the boot being the only place for the vega title, I think it looks good though if you think its a problem you two could always have moved the armament badge to a hair clip and made the vega title be on the arm instead.

    Any thoughts on what ship to do next?
    Hair clip sounds a nice Idea, I didn't even think about that before. Nice timing to ask if I had anything in mind, heheheheh.

    This one was different from the other two in many ways: That's the first ever digital colored work I did 100% alone. My friend who helped me create Dom&Jav was unable to do anything these days, so I put my hands to work on everything below (includes shading, which I need a lot more training to do it better).


    Fear the power of the Alien Harvester Mothershipgirl!!!



    I'm proud of doing this all by myself. Even thought there are a few mistakes and is away from being mastered, she looks great! (There isn't a real design or name for any weapon that the hull uses, so I just created them out of nowhere)
    Now, let's check some points with a picture: 
    The piece circled in black is on the arm. I tried to copy the part circled in red on her torso below the brea/ sts (this word censored too?!), but my drawing isn't 3d so it got a little different result and I had to improvise one thing or two. Monocolor (gray) wasn't very nice at all, then I added a little more dark green not only there, but everywhere armored.


    Green hair, for sure. It partially covers what appears to be a mechanical part of her face, I just thought it'd be cool to add this. The yellow fire coming out of her eye represents the glowing of same color you can see inside the hull during an ingame combat. That's visible in any variants, even ancient. The opening piece on left leg with those 3 little green lights fire green beams. Also, the Unknown Object is a nice collar! Oh, those hands... those creepy, ugly hands... well... (yes, it was intentional) she's an alien, then why not give her a *clearly not from Earth*  thing? The gun on left creepy hand... I simply did some squares here and there, then got that. Same applies for what she got on shoulders. Swarms surrounding her, just like Rangers with Dominion, however, the Rangers' size do NOT differ from the ones with Dom to the ones with the Alien (just like the ingame swarms from one and another hull that has it), this would mean that even in girly form, the Harvester is significantly larger than Dominion.




    That chibi is on fire!!!


    A backstory? Maybe. I had something in mind for this one as it's not a playable ship, but it ended up becoming something as big as a bible... anyway, here goes nothing! (1 = pre-fight, 2 = fight and 3 = after fight)


    Part 1A (base)

    Fleet one select -> 1 Covenant Cruiser MKV, 2 Covenant Cruiser MKIV, 3 Covenant Cruiser MKIII, 4 Hellfire Battleship MKV, 5 Hellfire Battleship MKIV, 6 Dominion.
    Commander: Are you ready to fly into a big one today? I'm pretty sure it will be a challenge.
    All Covenants: Yes!!!
    HF V: I am ready!
    HF IV: I'll follow your lead!
    Dominion: May I ask what are we going to fight?
    Commander: An Alien Harvester.
    Cov III: What?
    Dominion: Have you lost your sanity? Why do you want us to kill ourselves there?
    HF IV: T-that's crazy!
    Commander: What's this? Are you afraid?
    Dominion: Don't you ever dare to say that again. I am NOT afraid, but suicide mission is something I will never accept!
    Commander: Where is your self-confidence, Demon Corps? are you saying you'll certainly lose? Besides... don't you have ways to retreat in case of a defeat like all ships here do?
    Cov V: The commander is right. Even if we fail, we won't die, right?
    HF V: We are in a war, it's impossible to have no loss at all. Also... fighting, killing and dying for our comrades is our duty.
    HF IV: I'm with them!
    Cov III and IV: me too!
    Dominion: (long sigh) So be it. Let me boost your agility in battle and crush whatever crosses our path. Apologies fo...
    Commander: Not. necessary! Now, in the name of the rebellion; fly to the alien sector and destroy our enemy
    Everyone: ROGER!!!


    Part 1B (traveling)

    Orders recieved: Escort Fleet two - Javelin Flagship at 5 seconds north.
    Javelin: Hello fellow soldiers. Where are we going today?
    HF V: Leave the planet's orbit first.
    Javelin: Sure thing.
    Dominion: Take us to the other side of that unstable wormhole.
    Javelin: oh...kay... activating Wormhole Drive in 6 5 4 3 2 1. There! Now, I think it's ok if I take you to one more travel because your target area may be very far from the other side.
    Cov III: Why is it all green and empty here? it looks kind of scary.
    HF IV: Calm down, it's not like we're going to get lost.
    HF V: Warp us here ----,---,---. Hurry!
    Javelin: Hey, cut that out. My device has a cooldown, you know?
    Dominion: Quite pushy, aren't you? Anyway, ready when you are.
    Javelin: Activating Wormhole Drive in 6 5 4 3 2 1. Disband orders, I shall return to base. I'll probably be back if you finish the mission.
    Cov V: What do you mean by "if"? 
    Javelin: Sorry... WHEN you finish.
    Cov V: Hey, get back here!
    Javelin: No way, I recieved orders to return. Besides, I don't wanna be near that thing. You know, I'm not a combat ship so I'd rather stay away
    Dominion: Fleet, prepare your weapons.
    Fleet: Y-Yes!
    Dominion: Agility Field, activate! ... It's close enough now. Engaging target!


    Part 2A (fight)

    HF V: that thing on the horizon, it gives me the creeps.
    Dominion: I want to find something out...
    Cov IV: huh?
    Dominion: Let's see if aliens bleed.
    Harvester: How nice, 6 cute little girls for my score. Don't be shy, come here and let me eat you!
    Cov V: The only thing you will eat is my missiles.
    Cov IV: You three don't worry, we're going to absorb the damage to keep you safe.
    HF IV: And we'll defend you from here, my lady.
    Dominion: I hate how those aliens block our sensors, and it's already firing at us.
    All Covenants: Charge!
    Cov IV: Ooooouch! this... green bean hurts.
    Harvester: It's going to hurt even more before you die!
    Cov III: And here come the swarms.
    Dominion: You two must not get too close to it, or we'll be very troubled.
    HF IV and V: Affirmative.
    HF V: You too, my lady. Stay as far as you can be, it might want to target you for being a Carrier.
    All Covenants: Fire!
    Harvester: Don't resist, it will be much easier for all of us!
    HF IV and V: Fire!
    Dominion: Go, my children. Go forth and destroy this monster!


    Part 2B (75% health)

    Harvester: Unh! Charging Shockwave...
    Cov V: W-what is this?
    Cov III: Something big is coming, watch out!
    HF V: Oh no!
    Harvester: Rrrraaaaaah!
    All Covenants: Aaahn!
    HF IV: Are you alright?
    Cov III: M-my shields!
    Cov V: Oh... uh...
    Cov IV: That hurt even more than the beam.
    Harvester: I said it's going to hurt even more before you die! Did you really think I was joking?
    Cov IV: eek!
    Dominion: *Whispering* Don't worry, child. I'll keep repairing and refueling you. this will end soon. now go back there!
    HF V: Fire! ... You three can't stay this close. Fall back!
    HF IV: But they won't be in range to shoot! ... Fire!
    Cov V: If that's how it is, so be it. Fire!
    Harvester: Ow!
    Cov III: This is our job after all, right?
    Cov IV: Our priority is to take this thing down!
    Cov III and IV: Fire!


    Part 2C (50% health)

    Harvester: Insolent rebels! You will pay for this! Pulsar Shockwave!
    Dominion: Don't you two think you're getting too close? One of that is enough to knock you out.
    HF IV and V: Uh... *Unintelligible* ... Go!
    Harvester: Mmmrrrraaaa!
    Cov V: F-ffi...
    HF IV: That... really hurts a lot!
    Cov III: My equipement...
    Cov IV: T-this thing... doesn't die?!
    HF V: Kyaa!
    Harvester: Grrrr... ... You!
    Dominion: Now we have a problem.
    HF V: Uh, oh! It's looking at the lady.
    Harvester: You! I want you!
    Dominion: Darn it, How can I not outrun something this large?
    HF IV: We have no choice...
    Cov III: I got a leg! Everyone, Stop it!
    Cov IV: I got the other leg!
    Harvester: What... do you think you're doing?
    HF V: You're not going anywhere! Keep firing, all of you!
    Cov V: Got the other arm!
    HF IV: Grabbed the waist!


    Part 2D (25% health)

    Harvester: Activating Pulsar Shockwave.
    HF V: Fleet, prepare for impact!
    Harvester: Sacrificing yourselves for your dear flaghsip? How cute of you!
    Cov III: *Sobs*
    Harvester: Roooaaaaa!
    Cov III: .........
    Cov IV: I... can't move... anymore...
    HF IV: .........
    Dominion: Fleet, I'm out of shield. I guess I'll have to feel this pain with you.
    Harvester: Nothing can stop me! Nothing can save you from my fury! This is your end!
    Cov V: I think... I can still fire...
    HF V: Please, don't... stop... shooting.
    Harvester: You're mine now, Carrier!
    Dominion: Don't fail me now, my children. I have strength to keep you fighting, don't fail me!
    Harvester: "Your children"? Don't you mean my dead sisters' children?
    Dominion: ...
    Harvester: You rebels are truly insolen... Aargh!
    Cov IV: My lady... get away from... us, p-please!
    HF V: The lady's... swarms are heavily damaging it.
    Cov V: Then if we... fire another volley... it might explode right in...
    Dominion: DO IT!
    Harvester: If I go down, You are coming to h / e/ll with me!
    HF V: Fire!


    Part 3A (0%)

    Harvester: Mmmrrraa...
    Dominion: Aaaaaaahhh!
    Cov IV: We... won?
    Dominion: M-my wings!
    HF V: Oh my! that... was even worse than the shockwave pulses!
    Cov V: *Unintelligible* ... We... we're all cracked up.
    Dominion: Hey.
    Cov III: .........
    Dominion: Let's go home.
    Cov V: Give me your hand.
    Cov IV: *Nods*
    HF V: You'll be alright, sis
    HF IV: .........
    Javelin: JUMP! Hi there. Oh man, what just happ...
    Dominion: DON'T... finish your question... just take us back home... if that's what you came for
    Javelin: Oh... are you okay?
    Dominion: Do we look okay to you? idiot!
    Javelin: err... Activating Wormhole Drive in 6 5 4 3 2 1.


    Part 3B (back to base)

    Commander: Welcome back. Please, head to the bay to heal yourselves.
    Dominion: Why did you not tell me?
    Commander: Huh?
    Dominion: Why did you hide it from me? These are taken from... destroyed Harvesters?!
    Commander: Forgive me. I thought It would be better if you didn't know that. By the way, you didn't even ask about them before in the first place.
    Dominion: You gotta be kidding me.
    Commander: Hey, does that even matter? They are yours now, don't you think they see you as their mother nowadays? And you were once our enemy as well as those aliens are, but you've changed sides. Those were taken but they're here with you on the same side of this war once again.
    Dominion: *Sigh* Yeah... you're right.
    1 Ranger Swarm: *Pokes*
    Dominion: Calm down, kid. Let's head to bay. Go, fly ahead!
    Cov V: I think those two will take a while to wake up.
    HF V: Good thing is that they're still alive... Where is the lady?
    Cov IV: She must be yelling at the commander.
    Dominion: No, I wasn't. Now, if you excuse me; I want to stay close to those two while we repair.
    The 3: Yes, my lady!
    Dominion: By the way... I found out what I was looking for... I'm a little disappointed to know that aliens don't bleed at all.


    Um, I had to fill the fleet with something, so it got 3 Covenants and 2 Hellfires, however, I am not sure if I'll ever add them to this collection (that's more curved to a "no"). Dominion doesn't even mention her swarms on her own backstory, but she does here and calls them "my children", the fleet sometimes call her "lady" because of her higher rank. When the fleet grabs the Harvester to prevent it from reaching their carrier, think of it as an ingame ship blocking. Two members were defeated, but not killed because when a player ship is lost in battle, it's never lost permanently, right? Don't mind the stupid ending, I just couldn't think of anything better than that!
    My fleet is growing!
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  • HarpoonoZenith
    HarpoonoZenith
    Skilled Warrior
    Joined Mar 2013 Posts: 385
    Awww that Dominions a mommy! CX
    Image result for **** Kixeye
  • Glowlight
    Glowlight
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2016 Posts: 292
    edited 21 Jan 2018, 3:25PM
    Do the paladin carrier that would look cool with like using the top portion of the ship and bottom and face it upwards to look like wings. Also you could do the vanquisher and make them sisters or something. Idk just an idea...

  • GameHat
    GameHat
    Skilled Warrior
    Joined Nov 2013 Posts: 361
    edited 1 Feb 2018, 1:27AM
    Quite neat, though as an alien ship I personally would have expected a more 'organic' looking outfit/carapace, like Kerrigan in starcraft or such. ;)
    But thats more an aesthetic choice - cool to see a new addition, nice work on tackling this one yourself.

    Slightly off topic but what program are you using?
    In regards to your comment about needing more practice shading - As someone who has done a little art themself, I'll also say shading/volume is 80% about
    > being serious about keeping the 3d shape of what you're drawing in mind
    > and being serious about where the light source is in the picture (I even outright draw in a little placehold 'light bulb' to help track the light source origin and where it should cast to).

    Look up plenty of reference(analysing how light falls on shapes) and really stick to the idea that this is not a picture but instead a 3d sculpture you're making, and your shading practice will pay off.
    Even for a styalised art style like this having that firm grasp on 'shape actuality' (as my life drawing tutor would say) can make a real difference

    And for a more topic-relevant comment;
    If the ships are girls, does that mean the modules are guys? :tongue:
    3 chins, 3 teams, one victor;
  • Chaos Slayer
    Chaos Slayer
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Oct 2017 Posts: 100
    edited 17 Apr 2018, 5:37PM
    No @GameHat ... Modules are modules! 


    Despite not having any built yet, I decided to do this one (yes, all fully by myself like Alien Harvester) anyway.


    Behold the almighty altairian Bastion Cruiser Shipgirl!



    I'd have gold color priorized if I bothered with mark ups, but I don't! Of course the hair must be blue. Golden eyes fit nicely too. Altairian symbol as hair ornament was indeed a nice idea (thanks GameHat). Behind her arms and head, there is those 3 things in the ship's fron't but I don't even know if those have a name (Removed); also, what appears to be a cyan glowing core is present between them. I ended up making the two things on ship's backside look sharper on her back (now it looks a bit more like the ship's). The symbol for cruiser parts in crafting is a shield, it's golden and black for this ship and it's right there below the belly! The Epsilon Echo Cannon is there but different: I've removed the "turret" piece of it and turned it into a gun's grip so it can be held by human hands. Last but not least: Being a cruiser which the main role is to tank, her outfit is a very pretty armor, isn't it?

    Before I forget... Look at those chubby cheeks! While i was doing this artwork, someone poked me with that little detail but I decided to keep it that way because it looks freaking cute a̶n̶d̶ ̶a̶l̶m̶o̶s̶t̶ ̶m̶a̶k̶e̶s̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶w̶a̶n̶t̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶s̶q̶u̶e̶e̶z̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶m̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶ ̶a̶n̶ ̶h̶o̶u̶r̶!

    PS: a few friends told me that her hips are kind of wide and thighs are thick, but when I decided to change her a little, I did not change that point because of ingame description: "Plus look at all that leg room!" . Here it's "Plus look all that hip'n thigh room!". heheheh

     (outdated)

    From all 4 chibis I made so far, this one was the hardest because, well... it's an armored chibi!


    Due to the ship's recent release, I don't think I have much of a backstory but... (here goes nothing)


    1- Greetings, my name is Bastion. I am part of the Altairian's advanced technologies. I was designed to increase the vitality of a fleet by stopping weapons from ricochetting on everybody. I also have a hidden ability that you humans have never seen before, but I'm sure you will see and understand where the Altairian's true strength comes from.

    2- By the looks of it, you rebels were unaware of our presence in the void, weren't you? I see. Was it because you were too busy fighting those green things? "Aliens of Colony 47"? That does sound like trouble to me, though watching how you rebels fought them so bravely makes me think it was one of the reasons that made Klavic have such a friendly interaction with you.

    3- Ah yes, Klavic... I was designated by him to join you, fight alongside you and help you fly towards the path of enlightenment through the word of his father On-Wah. With an exchange: Please, assist in Klavic's quest to stop his rouge sister Ny'tah, whose wants to erase the teachings of On-wah from the void forever.

    4- What hidden ability do I have? It's called Firestorm Overdrive, Let me show you in battle. ... ... uh, those were too weak. It was just booooring!! ... Now we're talking. ... ... *whispering* Shields almost down. ... ... Rrrraaaahhh!!! Witness my true power!!! ... ... Hey commander, I am majestic, as well as my power, Right? Are you okay?

    5- You're lucky for having those nice girls on your fleet, I'm glad to have just joined them. Can I go there and socialize a bit? I just didn't introduce myself to them yet, heheh. I'm gonna see the cutters first. Uh? Why are you running? Oh... kay, I'll try the frigates. Hi ther... Wait, no! Don't run! Maybe the other cruisers... You've got to be kidding me! Commander, why is this happening?

    6- They're... afraid of my Overdrive power?! Maybe I should give them some time to approach me properly, right? But that redhead over there... that one who looks like a demon... she was kind to me and said I was not the first ship to be initially feared by the rest of this armada.

    7- Commander, I was designated to be with the rebellion permanently. This means that even if Klavic is, perhaps with hostile intentions, I am going to stay here and fight alongside you forever. Coming here was the best thing I've ever done, I will protect you and this lovely fleet of yours. You have my word. Uh??? Are you even listening? Hey stop staring at my cheeks, it's embarrassing!


    1: Introducion. 2: knowing the rebels' current situation. 3: Joining the rebellion because of Klavic's request. 4: Showing what she's capable of. 5: Everyone is running away from her when she tries to introduce herself to the fleet. 6: And finds out that it's because everyone fears her strength, except *You know who*. 7: Swearing eternal loyalty to the rebels w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶b̶e̶s̶t̶ ̶t̶e̶x̶t̶ ̶e̶n̶d̶i̶n̶g̶.
    My fleet is growing!
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  • Adrian Naidenov
    Adrian Naidenov
    Potential Threat
    Joined Nov 2017 Posts: 42

    Cant believe they turning every thing in Anime

    A Dreamer :D
  • Glowlight
    Glowlight
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Mar 2016 Posts: 292
    edited 14 Feb 2018, 11:22PM
    No @GameHat ... Modules are modules! 


    Despite not having any built yet, I decided to do this one (yes, all fully by myself like Alien Harvester) anyway.


    Behold the almighty altairian Bastion Cruiser Shipgirl!



    I'd have gold color priorized if I bothered with mark ups, but I don't! Of course the hair must be blue. Golden eyes fit nicely too. Altairian symbol as hair ornament was indeed a nice idea (thanks GameHat). Behind her arms and head, there is those 3 things in the ship's fron't but I don't even know if those have a name; also, what appears to be a cyan glowing core is present between them. I ended up making the two things on ship's backside look sharper on her back. The symbol for cruiser parts in crafting is a shield, it's golden and black for this ship and it's right there below the belly! The Epsilon Echo Cannon is there but different: I've removed the "turret" piece of it and turned it into a gun's grip so it can be held by human hands. Last but not least: Being a cruiser which the main role is to tank, her outfit is a very pretty armor, isn't it?

    Before I forget... Look at those chubby cheeks! While i was doing this artwork, someone poked me with that little detail but I decided to keep it that way because it looks freaking cute a̶n̶d̶ ̶a̶l̶m̶o̶s̶t̶ ̶m̶a̶k̶e̶s̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶w̶a̶n̶t̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶s̶q̶u̶e̶e̶z̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶m̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶ ̶a̶n̶ ̶h̶o̶u̶r̶ !



    From all 4 chibis I made so far, this one was the hardest because, well... it's an armored chibi!


    Due to the ship's recent release, I don't think I have much of a backstory but... (here goes nothing)


    1- Greetings, my name is Bastion. I am part of the Altairian's advanced technologies. I was designed to increase the vitality of a fleet by stopping weapons from ricochetting on everybody. I also have a hidden ability that you humans have never seen before, but I'm sure you will see and understand where the Altairian's true strength comes from.

    2- By the looks of it, you rebels were unaware of our presence in the void, weren't you? I see. Was it because you were too busy fighting those green things? "Aliens of Colony 47"? That does sound like trouble to me, though watching how you rebels fought them so bravely makes me think it was one of the reasons that made Klavic have such a friendly interaction with you.

    3- Ah yes, Klavic... I was designated by him to join you, fight alongside you and help you fly towards the path of enlightenment through the word of his father On-Wah. With an exchange: Please, assist in Klavic's quest to stop his rouge sister Ny'tah, whose wants to erase the teachings of On-wah from the void forever.

    4- What hidden ability do I have? It's called Firestorm Overdrive, Let me show you in battle. ... ... uh, those were too weak. It was just booooring!! ... Now we're talking. ... ... *whispering* Shields almost down. ... ... Rrrraaaahhh!!! Witness my true power!!! ... ... Hey commander, I am majestic, as well as my power, Right? Are you okay?

    5- You're lucky for having those nice girls on your fleet, I'm glad to have just joined them. Can I go there and socialize a bit? I just didn't introduce myself to them yet, heheh. I'm gonna see the cutters first. Uh? Why are you running? Oh... kay, I'll try the frigates. Hi ther... Wait, no! Don't run! Maybe the other cruisers... You've got to be kidding me! Commander, why is this happening?

    6- They're... afraid of my Overdrive power?! Maybe I should give them some time to approach me properly, right? But that redhead over there... that one who looks like a demon... she was kind to me and said I was not the first ship to be initially feared by the rest of this armada.

    7- Commander, I was designated to be with the rebellion permanently. This means that even if Klavic is, perhaps with hostile intentions, I am going to stay here and fight alongside you forever. Coming here was the best thing I've ever done, I will protect you and this lovely fleet of yours. You have my word. Uh??? Are you even listening? Hey stop staring at my cheeks, it's embarrassing!


    1: Introducion. 2: knowing the rebels' current situation. 3: Joining the rebellion because of Klavic's request. 4: Showing what she's capable of. 5: Everyone is running away from her when she tries to introduce herself to the fleet. 6: And finds out that it's because everyone fears her strength, except *You know who*. 7: Swearing eternal loyalty to the rebels w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶b̶e̶s̶t̶ ̶t̶e̶x̶t̶ ̶e̶n̶d̶i̶n̶g̶.

    The Legs are a little short and could use a little more detail but they are otherwise fantastic drawings and continue the good work I love your creations they're new and refreshing to see a fellow community member create something for the game.

    PS if you would like I can design one as well and see if you like that one too but don't think I'm dissing your work it is pretty good I just have a thing when it comes to details and shading in drawings
  • HarpoonoZenith
    HarpoonoZenith
    Skilled Warrior
    Joined Mar 2013 Posts: 385
    Never fails to impress!
    Image result for **** Kixeye
  • Chaos Slayer
    Chaos Slayer
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Oct 2017 Posts: 100
    Glowlight said:

    The Legs are a little short and could use a little more detail but they are otherwise fantastic drawings and continue the good work I love your creations they're new and refreshing to see a fellow community member create something for the game.

    PS if you would like I can design one as well and see if you like that one too but don't think I'm dissing your work it is pretty good I just have a thing when it comes to details and shading in drawings
    I'll do some fixes on Harvester and Bastion when I can.
    Hmm... You can design what? Be more specific: another ship or Bastion? if it's the former, go for it... what ship? if it's the latter, try keeping mine's appearance + I've stated before that I'm still not so good with shading.
    Thanks for the advice.
    My fleet is growing!
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  • Chaos Slayer
    Chaos Slayer
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Oct 2017 Posts: 100
    edited 17 Apr 2018, 5:46PM
    Update: (Sorry, no new shipgirl. Reason: I barely played the game for quite a while) Some needed changes on Bastion:

    Removed the gear behind her arms and head for two reasons: they point forward and come out from the ship's front part, which was unlikely for her to have it like that + because i couldn't think of a possible way that they could be attached to the armor's back.
    Fixed pointy chin.
    Drastic change on hair. A better asymmetrical haircut on face and a more volumous and flowing ponytail.
    Minor change for armor on neck and hips.
    The objects on her back are no longer sharp and now point up instead of down.
    Fixed legs size.
    Change on boots, now they look slightly more like part of the armor set.


    BONUS:



                                      How nice, 6 cute little girls for my score. Don't be shy, come here and let me eat you!

    I... just felt like doing yandere trance on Harvester...
    My fleet is growing!
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  • Flamin Hot
    Flamin Hot
    Minor Nuisance
    Joined Dec 2016 Posts: 134

    @Chaos Slayer said:
    Update: (Sorry, no new shipgirl. Reason: I barely played the game for quite a while) Some needed changes on Bastion:

    Removed the gear behind her arms and head for two reasons: they point forward and come out from the ship's front part, which was unlikely for her to have it like that + because i couldn't think of a possible way that they could be attached to the armor's back.
    Fixed pointy chin.
    Drastic change on hair. A better asymmetrical haircut on face and a more volumous and flowing ponytail.
    Minor change for armor on neck and hips.
    The objects on her back are no longer sharp and now point up instead of down.
    Fixed legs size.
    Change on boots, now they look slightly more like part of the armor set.

    BONUS:

                                      How nice, 6 cute little girls for my score. Don't be shy, come here and let me eat you!

    I... just felt like doing yandere trance on Harvester...

    I find this better than the art you first did for the harv, I think you should try the zeal or hellfire in this style

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